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Was it a leap that ended in an agonising fall, no, not really. It was a leap into the unexpected that left me amused and glad that I had taken the chance.
The book, as you can see from the cover opposite is billed as, 'short stories' by Marina, but I would argue that it is one story and not 5 as billed. Probably a minor disagreement between me, the author and editor on what is a novel and what is a a collection of short stories. I suppose in one sense that as the 'story' progressed from it's starting point in Coney Island into the city and Manhattan and then finally back to Coney Island at it's conclusion and that new characters were introduced in 'chapters 1 through three, I would call it a novella and not a collection of shorts, but who am I to argue with the author and the editor?
I suppose, as each 'chapter' had it's own title and was therefore a 'short' this might explain my one 'big' gripe with the book. Wheel of Wonder Chapter one takes up 17% of the book, That's almost a quarter of it, and my gripe, well, it was just one long never ending chapter with no natural breaks or pauses to rest. You just had to keep going and going and going and it almost seemed never ending. I really don't care how well a book is written or how engaging the story is, you need to have natural breaks, if for no other reason than to rest your eyes, rest your mind, go to the loo, make a cup of coffee and grab a couple of digestive biscuits to dunk in said coffee; but alas there were none. Same with Chapter 2 , 17% through to 35% no breaks, no pauses, but then we got three in chapter 3 and then no more....... It may just be me and I may be the only one to have picked up on this, if so, sorry, but then this is my review and I have to call it as I see it.
But, the story, I LOVED IT! It was quirky, it was funny, it was harrowing.
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As the outbreak spreads we find ourselves in Times Square where locals and tourists are soon hemmed in by the Army and the Police and from there on in it is a roller coaster of a ride as a few hardy and disparate locals try and survive the carnage. bringing out the best and worst, as one would expect in these circumstances, in the survivors.
I don't want to give too much away and as I said it is not my usual reading fayre, and apart from my gripe about the breaks I did find it engaging. Pitkin, you wanted to see dying horribly, Chris, sweet Chris well you just want her to survive, I thought about that movie with Edward Norton and the kerb stone and the boot on the back of the neck, oh dear. T-Bird, needed a slap a really big time slap and Parker you just knew was going to be an anti hero.... Moira, if I was her husband I would have thrown her to the Zombies at the beginning along with 'the baby' Chrissie..... and as for that tit Steve, well what goes around comes around
This book is so cheap, it is a steal go on get it, you know you want to ...... oh and as a bonus there is a wee short story from Jaye Manus, The devil His Due, tagged on at the end about one of the Devils 'Soul Collectors' that had a twist in the tale which was funny and intriguing , so 'two' books for the price of one.....
Editing for Kindle: 4 out 5
Reading Enjoyment: 3 out of 5 see gripe above
Plot: 5 out of 5
Overall Rating: 5 out of 5
No of Pages: 143
Chapters: 5
I read it too. It's a whole lot of fun - a scary, grotesque, nervous laughter sort of way.
ReplyDeleteI do agree the stories are inter-connected. Each builds upon the previous story.
Oops! Meant 'in a scary...'
ReplyDeleteBut it was a good wee read though xx
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